BristleClaw

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Name: BristleClaw
Age: 115 moons
Gender: Tom
Rank: Elder
Clan: BoneClan
Breed: Maine Coon
Personality:

BristleClaw is a stuck up old cat, he is usualy grouchy and selfish at about all times. BristleClaw's only time of joy is when no one is around, from the memory of no one to cuddle or hide behind. his family was never there by his side, his mother was happy with her own kits but not BristleClaw. After taking after his father leaving the clan and never caring for the kits, ran to another shecat everytime. BristleClaw is happy with him self, but he still trys to remember a the thought of a happiness when he was a kit with his mother. But all they turn into is nightmares. BristleClaw never sleeps with the other, instead he lays where his father shall lie.

Apperance:

BristleClaw is a average maine coon, some gray hair there and than. BristleMaine has a M shape on his fourhead, and his whiskers are about six inches. BristleClaw's tail is little bit fluffy but some was cut off by an attack from his kithood. BristleClaw's eyes are light green. BristleClaw has gained some weight over the last few years. BristleClaw's colors are Brown, Black, White, and Gray. He has a brown nose with black layering. His eyes have alot of black layering, witch makes it look like mascara. BristleClaw has White on the bottom of his stomach and some black blotches. That is one of the reasons he lays in the field where no one can see him most of the time.

History:

BristleClaw was a full black maine coon and a kit. Always was alone, no one by his side. His father's name was NightScare and his mother's was DreamCatcher. She always would demand for him to leave, but the sybling declared no. And so BristleClaw's mother never fed him or did anything by the age of 2 moons.

By the age of 13 moons BristleClaw was a warrior, and was already like his father, Leaving his clan and leaving all the shecats he had. When BristleClaw was asleep harmlessly in a den, he was attacked. Not aware of what or who it was he still faught back. he was scratched, bit, and lost a piece of his tail. Sence that day BristleClaw will never sleep at night, unless demanded by the leaders.

RPG Example:

As BristleClaw walked through the sunny field, there was a screach BristleClaw jumped in terrior. He could tell something wasnt right. Before he knew it he was on the ground pinned by his sybling ScarTail, she was a showoff in the family. "What is it ScarTail?" BristleMaine said pushing her off. "We need.." ScarTail replyed trying to breathe "To g-get out of h-here." She finished. BristleClaw didnt understand, what was wrong? he thought. But before he knew it she was gone. He tried calling her name. BristleClaw continued to walk in search for food. There was a whisper in the wind, BristleClaw couldnt quiet make out what it was saying. But that didnt disturb him one bit, there was a hiss in the bushes. As BristleClaw looked over he saw blueish glowing eyes. Finally he went to go check it out, but right when he turned his head. He was right smack on the ground. BristleClaw tried getting up. He moaned and screamed, but know one could here him. BristleClaw started to feel dizzy, soon after he was out like a light. by the time BristleMaine was awake he was in a box. He tried busting out of it againand again. It would not budge! After trying and trying, he needed to rest. "Mabey in the morning." BristleClaw said gentally slowly closeing his eyes.

From where?: BristleClaw was found under a tree hours after the attack.

[Frosty]

Note that the name is supposed to be Bristeclaw. You don't need to capitalize the suffix. ALso try using the spell check button next time. Anyways, this bio is Accepted

[happylaffytaffy]

Ok, thankyou for the advise.